[New] Rank Request

[Iraxia]

Having spent a good while inspecting your Advanced Builder Rank Submission, I do not find it to be of sufficient enough quality to be accepted. 

I shall outline my reasoning below. 

1. Use of Space - Detailing this build as 'finished' does not seem to be accurate. Large rooms filled with nothing or a few berry plants and empty hallways that may have a decent structural design yet lack any real detail. see fig1, fig2
   
2. Use of Terrain - I like seeing unique builds done inside of mountains and underground, but a large portion of your submission is quite literally zero-gravity hanging out of the side without support or any real vision present. see fig3
   
3. Completion - As detailed in section '1', this build appears quite clearly to be an in-progress build; unfinished or barely started rooms are visible almost everywhere. 
   
4. Decor - This build seems to show that you have some understanding of structural decoration, but there is little other than wall-planters filled exclusively with leaves on the edges of all the walls; there is an overwhelming lack of detail versus repetition.
   
5. Features - I would like to see more features included in this structure (Functions, features, appearing to be lived in); I liked where you were going with the little cage-lift in the starting room, but your follow-through on completing it or fleshing it out leaves it lacking. 
   
6. Exterior - As alluded to in section '2', there appears to be little-to-no care for the exterior environment, the mountain or the water-body surrounding it. I would like to see less zero-gravity structures that make little sense being where they are. (Things lack support.) see fig3
   

fig1     fig2    fig3 

In closing, this build feels.. overall lacking in detail, vision oversight and completion. I would like to see what changes are made after you finish reading this, and look forward to a more fleshed-out build submission. 




Rank Submission: Denied | Thread Closed